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Part 10 of 10
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I hope you enjoyed this chapter. I'm hoping to have the next one ready for next weekend.
Thanks for reading and have a good one!
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I hope you enjoyed this chapter. I'm hoping to have the next one ready for next weekend.
Thanks for reading and have a good one!
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DUN-DUN-DUUUUUUN! "This can't be good." Couldn't have put it any better myself Belle!
I liked this. Normally I'd prefer it have been longer, but I think you summed up your unique views on time travel quite well in page 707. By the way, I don't think I've ever seen time travel beliefs like this before, so for that reason I've given a 5-star rating for Originality. The technique was good, I liked that it wasn't rushed despite having only 10 pages to accomplish anything. It didn't especially have a huge impact on me especially seeing the little time I have known Nigel so I haven't really gotten to care about what happens to him. But overall, I like this. Hope Seth comes out of this one alive and I can't wait to keep reading!
-Kirb Hysteria