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SC449 - BELLE (Make It Funny) by simpleCOMICS SC449 - BELLE (Make It Funny) by simpleCOMICS
I actually had a hard time thinking of a good one for Belle (I apparently don't have any ongoing joke for her, something I need to work on) but since everyone seemed to really like the "stare-off" comic I decided to let you guys choose just how bitter these two can be! :D

You can download this comic and add your own text to it to "make it funny!"

I made the word balloons a little bigger than I normally make them so you'll have all the room you need (But don't feel obligate to fill the word balloons. It's not necessary.)
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Hello, I am Ang-Jojo and I will be doing a Critique for you! this comic is a nice one, I believe It is a template-like version since there are no text in the speech bubble, am i right? Said in the description is that these two characters are in a stare-off kind of competition. What I think looking at the art is that they look like frenimies, so the face expression is done well. :) Since they are kind of frenimies not showing emotions and just staring at each other is a perfect way to show it. the 3rd picture, showing no dialoge, make the silence obvious, so people will know that they are either thinking, or they are just too angry that they cannot speak.
Though mostly this comic is good, I think that maybe, just maybe, the characters should have a slightly different expression in each picture, to make this comic a slightly more exciting one
This is an exciting comic, and I cannot wait to see the comic when the text in filled in!
Thank you for reading,
Ang-Jojo
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Kaitoraikan Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
Bitter enough for you, Jason ? ;) kaitoraikan.deviantart.com/art…
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simpleCOMICS Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh yeah, totally. XD
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Kaitoraikan Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Glad you like it :D !!
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FlyingBrickAnimation Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012   General Artist
Angel: I'm bored.
Belle: Me too.
Angel: Staring contest?
Belle: Sure.
...
Angel: You blinked.
Belle: I know.
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TheHappySpaceman01 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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You probably won't get the joke unless you've seen the video.
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ShonenJump4eva Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Panel 1: Angel=So, you took Ed's advice for trying to get Joey.
Belle=Yes.
Panel 2: Angel=And now Joey's with me and you have no one.
Belle=Yes.
Panel 4: Angel=You're gonna kill Ed the next time you see him won't you?
Belle=Yes.
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TrueCynder Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lmao perfect XD
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ShonenJump4eva Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Thank you.
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TrueCynder Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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ShonenJump4eva Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
If you want to do that thing of uploading it and typing the words on it, you can use mine, just give me credit.
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