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Damien's Time - Saving Lilith 4 Lucifer gathered up the rabbit meat, and went back to his fire outside the cave after Lilith did not eat any of it. He was disappointed that this plan did not work, but was still hopeful that another plan would work soon. Getting as much of a reaction out of her as he was currently getting, was just giving him that much more hope that he was getting close to bringing her out of her current condition. Even when one plan did not work, he knew in his heart that another one soon would. For now he would let her rest in the cave, he needed to eat some food, and clean himself up a bit. Lucifer sat by his fire as he finally got around to eating his rabbit. It was a pretty good meal. Good aroma, good flavor, very filling. It was everything that rabbit should be, but he wasn't really as satisfied by it as he thought he would be. It could be that his mind was on Lilith, and he was too worried about getting her out of her coma to really enjoy any meal. It could be that
Damien's Time - Lilith Awakens 3 Lilith listened thoughtfully as her story was told to her by someone who was basically a stranger to her. He had done good in gathering his information. Everything he told her was correct, and there was nothing really more that she could add to it. She knew that she was going to be expected to tell what she knew now. The problem was, she knew that her information would be nowhere near as accurate as what she had just been told by Lucifer, if it was in anyway accurate at all. All of her information about Lucifer, and the village he came from had been told to her through Jehovah and Adam. Lilith did not trust anything that she had ever been told be either of those two. She sighed as she realized how difficult the telling of what she had been told was going to be. “Everything you have told me is correct,” Lilith said with a nod, “You have done well in your information gathering on me. I, of course, am aware of who you are, and the village that
Damien's Time - Lilith Awakens 2 “You have been feeding me and giving me water when I would accept it from you ?” Lilith asked with some doubt in her voice. “I don't want to call doubt to what you are telling me, especially since you have just nursed me back to health, but I have reason to not believe you. I have some memory of what was happening to me before I was discovered by you, and while I may have accepted water from you, I have serious doubt that I would have accepted any food from you.” Lucifer listened closely to what Lilith was saying, and watched her reaction as he responded to it, “Of course I would have to feed you while you were in your coma. You would have never survived as long as you have without taking some kind of nourishment into your system.” “This is true,” Lilith slowly say while looking away from him, “I would have to receive some kind of nourishment to survive as long as I have, but the probl